Sunday, April 12, 2020

Oh my time!!



Oh my time, 
My only rhyme. 

It is something that we can never own,
Something that passes by unknown.
Good time may come to make you glow,
Everyone says just go with the flow.

Every now and then I ask for you,
If everyone left it's only me and you. 
When will it finally come, my time,
As flexible as non-sticky slime.

We must thank god for such a blessing,
But all we do is only cursing.
It is important and everyone's only craving,
All we have to do is proper using and saving.

29 comments:

  1. Nice Rhyme utilise your time😊

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    1. Even your reply is a rhyme🀣. But thank you ❤❤... It means alot
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  2. Such a cute thing✌🏻❤️

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    1. Haha thank you❤❤. Do share and support.

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    1. Thank you buddy ❤❤. Do share and support

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  5. Good coordination of rhyming in the rhyme.
    Nice one faizu, carry on.

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    1. Thank you arunaaa❤❤. Your support is needed

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    1. Thank you akshu❤❤. Means alot. Do share and support

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    1. Thank you bhai❤❤. Means a lot.
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  8. Thank you❤. Do share and support

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  9. Bahut Acha hai ...... I am impressed by the hidden talents coming out during this quarantined times ...... Keep the good work going Faizaan bhai

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    1. Thank you so much bhai❤❤. It means alot!! Do share and support.

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  10. Time can be passed by patience (sabr)
    May allah SWT give us so much patience
    Aameen.
    MashaAllah nice thought.😍

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    1. True though πŸ’―. Thank you ❤❤ means alot. Do share and support.

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  11. Good job j... A good rhyme to understand time...πŸ€©πŸ˜€πŸ˜„

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  12. Good one Faizi!
    Keep up the hard work :)

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  13. Congratulation to my friend for becoming a poet!it was really good ,keep writing bro!

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  14. Thank you so much ❤ . Do share and support.

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